This draft has had signicant changes made since the last. Firstly the font of the title has been changed as a trial to see if it works with the rest of the article. Secondly I have capitalised the "I" at the beginning to stick to the conventions of most articles. Next I have continued to use the box and text format for my pull-quotes from the text, so as to stand out from the page and grab attention.
I also decided to change the layout again as I wanted a busier looking article, therefore the text is not positioned in usual plain paragraphs and instead is placed around the page, divided between pictures and pull-quotes. The positioning of pictures is likely to change however.
My second draft has made slight progress over the previous one. Mostly the template, font and method of using black boxes at tilted angles containing the sub description. This will be used more in my next draft.
The position of text has also changed as I liked the layout of text on one side and accompanying images on the right.
My first draft of the article consists of mostly positioning of text on the pages, there isn't enough to use to fill up most of the gaps, but its enough to make an effective article. I have created the title and accompanying description which is informal, reflecting the magazine and is quite effective.
